A STATEMENT, (I wrote this during the summer, a little project) what do you think?

"Everybody dies at one point, we all know it, but sometimes were given a chance, and sometimes, one day in a million, one person lives, and on that one day a community comes together. Because you see, it doesnt take a God to create a kingdom; it doesn't take a madman with a goverment to make piece, sometimes it just takes just one survivor, to make a community"
The whole thing is on my actors site, click on the icon that says creative writing!!
Adam :) xx
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Oh I really like it, the repetition of certain words make it sharp but yet it's really comforting, I really like it!!






